Sunday, 21 September 2014

Writing T3

WALT write recounts with descriptive language.

Cross country

The small car park at Clive school is getting filled with children keen to run. The stone walls on the side were blocking the view of the runners getting ready to start. There were lines of children from eight year olds to 11 year olds. The car park started to get windy. The stone concrete was cold. The plants surrounded us as if they were cheering for us.

 The parents were waiting for their children to start the race. Then I heard Mr Wallace shout" year five girls please come up". We all lined up behind the line.

 All I could hear was Mr Wallace shout"On your marks get set BANG!"
 Tandia shot off like a cheater. Then I heard mum cheering for me "keep running Niva".
 So then I shot of for the finish line. 

I finily finished. I went to the table with Ane and she writ my number down. I was so surprised with what I came. I came tenth wow but I was a little upset though because I came seventh last year. But I was still happy with my number.

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