Tuesday, 1 April 2014

Cold day

2.4.14
In this story I worked on using interesting sentences joiners and correct capitals and full stops.

When I sit on the damp wood in the lonely playground ,I feel sad.  As I sit on the damp wood,I can 
hear the children talking.  The nice smell of rose's goes up my nose as I walk down the path.

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