Choir

Te Reo

This is my favourite piece of writing in term 1.

15.4.14

One day Steve once said he would take me for a tuna fishing trip. I  said " I  will  go". So he took me to the boat. As we passed the wavey seas I fished all day. Until we came to the spot we needed.It was night now so I put my fishing rode away and watched Steve fish for tuna. All of a sudden I felt a big shake our boat ran out of petrol. I started to panick. I yelled"how are we going to get home". My voice eackoed through the foggy and gloomy sky. I was srcared. We were so far that we were out of range. We hade to  wate till the morning. Then we saw another boat we had to raise our voices to ge there ation they heard so they gave us some gooey petrol. Then we sailed home.

Inquiry: 3.4.14

Cold day

2.4.14

In this story I worked on using interesting sentences joiners and correct capitals and full stops.

When I sit on the damp wood in the lonely playground ,I feel sad.  As I sit on the damp wood,I can 

hear the children talking.  The nice smell of rose's goes up my nose as I walk down the path.